Script edits and fixes 121

#31 The Jewel Ring's description now matches what it actually does.

In 1.0

The Jewel Ring's description said it protected against Dark and Petrify, though it only ever blocked Petrify.

Now

The description now names Petrify only.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Assassin, my implementation

#38 Ten lines of dialogue that stated the wrong fact, mechanic or speaker are corrected.

In 1.0

Ten lines stated a wrong fact, mechanic or speaker, differing from the Japanese.

Now

All ten now match the Japanese meaning, keeping old words where they fit.

Credit: previously found by Clyde Mandelin's Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#44 The line at the Narshe gate is now Wedge's, since Vicks is the one who steps aside.

In 1.0

At the Narshe gate in the opening, Vicks announces that he will handle it and says "Stand back!" Yet it is Wedge who then charges the gate while Vicks steps aside.

Now

The line is now Wedge's.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation

#50 L.4 Flare's description no longer lists the wrong levels it hits.

In 1.0

The Lore description for L.4 Flare said it strikes enemies of level 2, 4 and 6. It actually hits enemies whose level is a multiple of 4.

Now

It now reads "LV4, 8, 12".

Credit: previously found and fixed by Imzogelmo, my implementation

#281 Shadow's line in the Veldt cave no longer misgenders him as her in its first sentence.

In 1.0

When the party finds Shadow badly wounded in the Cave in the Veldt, the next line called him "her" twice: they can do nothing for her here and should take her to Thamasa by airship.

Now

Neither sentence calls Shadow "her" any more.

Credit: previously found by mblock129, my implementation

#287 The trooper hinting at the Emperor's secret treasure now correctly says he's telling Locke, not the listener.

In 1.0

A lone Imperial trooper said he had valuable information "for you", then gave a hint for finding the Emperor's secret treasure, though he is looking at Locke, the one in the bandana.

Now

He now says the information is for the friend with the bandana.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation

#288 A trooper's line now correctly says the Commander, not General Leo, was defeated in that scene.

In 1.0

At Doma Castle, after Cyan cuts down the Imperial commander, a fleeing trooper shouted that "the general" had been defeated, though General Leo is not the one who falls.

Now

The trooper now shouts that "the commander" has been defeated.

Credit: previously found by ManuLöwe, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#289 The Albrook scholar's garbled explanation of the two Atma Weapons is rewritten to clearly describe each one.

In 1.0

A weapons scholar in Albrook said two Atma Weapons existed 1000 years ago, then muddled the explanation: one supposedly turned a person's power into a sword, and the other was "an monster" bred for destruction.

Now

He now says one is a sword whose power depends on who wields it, and the other "a monster born for destruction". His first line also spells out "two".

Credit: previously found by ManuLöwe, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#295 The esper tutorial no longer claims equipping an esper always raises a stat to its maximum; some raise it by a fixed amount instead.

In 1.0

The esper tutorial said that some equipped Espers raise qualities such as Strength, HP and MP to their 'maximum limits' at the next level up, but some Espers add a fixed amount to a stat, with no cap involved.

Now

The line now says only that some equipped Espers raise qualities such as Vigor, HP and MP at the next level up.

Credit: my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#315 Vicks now calls Terra sorceress instead of the male sorcerer, matching that he's just called her a woman.

In 1.0

In the opening, Vicks calls Terra 'this woman' and then 'this sorcerer', the male title.

Now

He now calls her 'this sorceress'.

Credit: previously found by ManuLöwe, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#349 An NPC now says Duncan griped that Vargas's training was not going well, instead of saying Vargas resented it.

In 1.0

An NPC says Duncan made his son Vargas follow a strict martial arts life, and that Vargas resented it.

Now

The NPC now says Duncan griped that the training was not going well.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#599 Sixty-four lines of dialogue that stated the wrong fact, mechanic or speaker are corrected.

In 1.0

Sixty-four lines stated a wrong fact, game mechanic or speaker, against the Japanese: the battle lessons in the Narshe beginner's house, Shadow's dreams, the Esper World flashback and more.

Now

All sixty-four now match the Japanese meaning.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#630 The Atma Weapon's description now says it is stronger at high level and when HP is near full, instead of "Transforms at Level Up".

In 1.0

The Atma Weapon's description said it "Transforms at Level Up", as if the sword changed only when its wielder gained a level.

Now

It now says it is stronger at high level and when HP is near full, which is how its power is worked out on every hit.

Credit: my implementation

#42 Cyan now speaks formally in lines where the Japanese has him speaking formally.

In 1.0

Sabin, an NPC in Maranda and an NPC in Nikeah joke that Cyan talks in old-fashioned English, yet he said "thou" once in 139 lines, where the Japanese has him speak formally throughout.

Now

Twenty of his lines are formal.

1.0

Now

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation

#291 The Ancient Castle's diary and riddle now call her princess throughout, instead of Queen.

In 1.0

The Ancient Castle's story called her the Queen in three places: the book titled Queen's Diary, a line saying even the Queen was turned to stone, and a riddle's queen who stands and takes five steps. The Japanese says princess in all three.

Now

All three say princess.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#296 Gestahl's requests to Terra and about sending Leo now consistently speak for the whole team he's sending, not just himself.

In 1.0

Gestahl asked Terra to accompany him to Crescent Island, then pleaded with her to 'come with me', as if he were going himself, though he sends General Leo in his place.

Now

Both requests now ask Terra to go with the team he is sending.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#297 The party leader's thought after the Warring Triad falls no longer reads as an order; it says magic has not disappeared even with them defeated.

In 1.0

After all three of the Warring Triad fell, a line about the Statues was worded like an order to defeat them, followed by the claim that magical power will not disappear.

Now

The party leader now thinks that even with the Warring Triad defeated, magical power has not disappeared, and wonders whether Kefka drained their power.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#298 Locke now says the Empire uses Magitek, not vague magic, to enslave the world.

In 1.0

When Setzer says the Empire has made him rich, Celes scolds him and Locke adds that the Empire is using 'magic' to enslave the world. The Japanese names Magitek.

Now

Locke now says Magitek.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#299 Terra's line about controlling her Esper power now keeps 'only for a short time', matching her Morph time limit.

In 1.0

After learning that Maduin was her father, Terra said she finally feels she can begin to control her power. The Japanese adds that this holds only for a short time.

Now

Terra's line now includes it.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#300 Tritoch's closing line no longer invents a trial that never happens; she now speaks of trusting the party's resolve.

In 1.0

When the party frees Tritoch from the ice, her speech ended with a challenge to see whether they are worthy, though no test follows.

Now

Tritoch now ends by saying she will trust the party's resolve.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#301 Ramuh's remark about Terra calming down is now third person, matching the scene, instead of addressing her directly.

In 1.0

Ramuh told Terra directly to relax, though the scene has him observing her from outside.

Now

Ramuh now remarks that she seems to have calmed down.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#302 The Opera retry dialogue now counts down remaining performance days, instead of sounding like extra chances.

In 1.0

When a night at the Opera went wrong, the impresario complained that the performance was awful and offered 'just 3 more chances', later '2 more chances', as if he were granting retries himself.

Now

He now says the show still has three more days to run, then that only two days of performances are left.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#305 Locke now specifically names Jidoor's aristocrats, instead of the vague people of Jidoor.

In 1.0

Celes points out that no boats sail to the Empire's continent, and Locke answered that 'the people' of Jidoor can probably help. The Japanese names Jidoor's aristocrats.

Now

Locke now names them.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#306 An Esper in the Esper World now says 'after all these centuries', instead of a vague 'all these years'.

In 1.0

In the Esper World of the past, one of the Espers wondered why this is happening now 'after all these years', with a human in their land. The Japanese speaks of hundreds of years.

Now

The Esper now says 'after all these centuries'.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#307 Arvis now describes combining Narshe's resources, not just its money, with Figaro's machinery.

In 1.0

Arvis sums up the plan to storm the Empire as Narshe's 'money' joined with Figaro's machinery. The Japanese word means resources.

Now

Arvis now speaks of Narshe's 'resources' combined with Figaro's machinery.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#308 The Imperial soldier's line now says the Espers attacked and ruined the Empire, instead of merely terrifying it.

In 1.0

An Imperial soldier says the Espers who came out of the Sealed Gate are 'terrifying' the Empire. The Japanese says they attacked it and left it in ruins.

Now

He now says the Espers attacked the Empire and that it lies in ruins.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#309 A thief in South Figaro in the World of Ruin now says the treasure an NPC sought can bring back the dead.

In 1.0

In the World of Ruin, a thief in South Figaro's cafe says an NPC came through looking for 'some secret treasure'. The Japanese says a treasure that can bring back the dead.

Now

The thief now says the NPC was after a secret treasure that can bring back the dead.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#310 Locke now speaks of one particular secret treasure in the Imperial capital, instead of several unspecified ones.

In 1.0

When Celes asks Locke why he is coming with her, he says there are 'bound to be treasures' in the Empire. The Japanese speaks of one particular secret treasure there.

Now

Locke now mentions 'that secret treasure' as a reason, before adding that he has always wanted a look inside the Empire.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#311 A South Figaro townsman in the World of Ruin now places the thieves' boss on the second floor of the inn.

In 1.0

In South Figaro in the World of Ruin, a townsman says the boss of the thieves in town is 'on the second floor' without saying of which building. The Japanese names the inn.

Now

He now says the boss is on the second floor of the inn.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#312 In the World of Ruin, the NPC who reports Figaro Castle fixed no longer opens with an invented 'Nonsense!'.

In 1.0

In the World of Ruin, after Edgar rejoins, an NPC in Figaro Castle reports that the repair is done and the castle can head for the surface, opening with an unexplained 'Nonsense!' that the Japanese does not have.

Now

He now just reports the repair and gives the word to surface.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#313 Figaro Castle's prison guard now says an ancient text was found in the library, instead of crediting the party with finding it.

In 1.0

The guard at Figaro Castle's prison asks whether the party found an ancient text in the library, as if they had. The Japanese only says that such a text was found.

Now

He now says he has heard that an ancient text was found in the library.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#314 An Ancient Castle soldier now says Odin is the only one left and asks whether Odin's wounds have healed.

In 1.0

In the Ancient Castle's flashback, a soldier says Odin is 'here' and asks whether 'your' wounds are healed, as if speaking to Odin. The Japanese says Odin is the only one left and asks about his wounds.

Now

The soldier now says Odin is the only one left and asks whether Odin's wounds have healed.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#327 The Impresario now says Setzer appears at the climax, instead of a specific scene number.

In 1.0

At the Opera House, after Locke says he has read the letter, the Impresario says Setzer will probably appear 'at the climax of Scene 1'. The Japanese names no scene.

Now

The Impresario says Setzer will probably appear right at the climax.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#328 Celes now says we were augmented as a group of Magitek Knights, instead of claiming she alone was asleep for it.

In 1.0

When Edgar tells the others that the Empire is draining the Espers' magic, Celes says she remembers nothing because she was asleep when they augmented her.

Now

She says 'we' were asleep when they augmented 'us', speaking for the Magitek Knights, who were infused as a group.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#329 Terra now tells Duane that Katarin's unborn baby needs him, instead of your new baby.

In 1.0

When Terra leaves Mobliz to go and fight, she tells Duane that Katarin and 'your new baby' need him, though the baby has not been born yet.

Now

She says Katarin needs his help, and so will the baby.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#330 Strago's line now says ordinary people feared the Magi's power from the war's remembered horror, instead of blaming them for starting it.

In 1.0

In Thamasa, Strago says that after the War of the Magi his people, the Mage Warriors, were despised, and that everyone felt they had started the war.

Now

He says ordinary people feared their powers, because everyone still remembered the horror of that war.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#331 Celes now hedges that Espers and magic might cease to exist, instead of stating it as certain.

In 1.0

Before the party goes into Kefka's Tower, Celes admits she is not sure what destroying the Statues will do, then says flatly that the Espers and magic 'will cease to exist'.

Now

She says they 'may cease to exist'.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#332 Strago now hedges that magic might disappear, instead of will most definitely.

In 1.0

Before the party goes into Kefka's Tower, Strago says that the Espers and magic 'will most definitely disappear' from the world.

Now

He says they 'may disappear' from the world.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#333 The legend on a statue in Esper Mountain's cave now says the gods realized the folly of their own power, instead of being laughed at.

In 1.0

In the cave of statues on Esper Mountain, a small statue's legend of the three goddesses said they realized they were being laughed at by those who had banished them.

Now

It now says they realized the folly of their own vast power, which called forth endless strife.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#334 At Leo's grave, Celes now tells Locke you're kind, instead of he was so gentle.

In 1.0

At Leo's grave, after Locke's line, Celes says 'He was so gentle', as if speaking of Leo.

Now

She says 'You're so kind' to Locke.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#335 Celes is now asked whether she came, and answers that she followed the party to settle her score with the Empire.

In 1.0

When Gestahl and Kefka face the party at the Statues, Celes is greeted with 'Welcome back!' and answers 'I came to stop you!'

Now

She is asked whether she has come, and answers that she followed the party because she has a score to settle with the Empire.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#336 Gestahl now tells Celes her and Kefka's task is to produce heirs for his Magitek Empire, not a shared birthright to rule.

In 1.0

At the Statues, Gestahl calls Celes to his side and tells her that ruling the world with him is her birthright.

Now

He tells her that she and Kefka are to give his Magitek Empire its heirs.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#337 An NPC in Tzen now says he is scared stiff at the thought of Kefka watching, instead of losing his nerve on lookout duty.

In 1.0

An NPC in Tzen, after the world's ruin, says he was on lookout duty for Kefka and lost his nerve.

Now

He says the thought of Kefka watching them leaves him scared stiff.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#338 The Mobliz child's line now asks whether Mama will die too, instead of I'll have you.

In 1.0

In Mobliz, one of the children Terra looks after says 'I'll have you if something happens to Mama!!', Mama being the children's name for Terra.

Now

The child asks whether Mama is going to die too, and says it won't let that happen.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#339 The Narshe refugee now tells the party to go wake the frozen Esper themselves, instead of saying he'll go with them.

In 1.0

A refugee from Narshe, met in Kohlingen after the world's ruin, says he is going back to Narshe, and that with the party along they can wake the frozen Esper.

Now

He tells the party to go to Narshe themselves, since they just might be able to wake the frozen Esper.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#340 The line during Sabin's outfit choice is now the offstage voice noting it's a martial arts outfit, instead of Me go to funeral.

In 1.0

When the party dresses Gau in the Jidoor clothing shop, Sabin picks an outfit and the next line reads 'Me go to funeral?'

Now

That line is now the offstage voice remarking that it is a martial arts outfit, in the same quoted style as its asides on the others' picks.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#341 Celes now says Terra is reacting to the Esper, not that she can feel its mind.

In 1.0

When Terra confronts the Esper at Narshe in battle, Celes says 'I can actually feel its mind'.

Now

She says that Terra is reacting to the Esper.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#342 Banon now asks what happened and realizes the Espers did it, instead of asking odd questions.

In 1.0

Talking to Banon in Vector, burning after the Espers' attack, he asks 'What ARE you talking about?!' and then 'Talking with Espers?', as if answering someone.

Now

He asks what in the world happened here, then realizes the Espers did it and can hardly believe it.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#343 The Espers say their friends are dying and will lend the party power, not that they are gone.

In 1.0

When Ifrit and Shiva give the party their Magicite in the Magitek Research Facility, they say their friends are all gone, though more dying Espers wait in the rooms that follow.

Now

They say their friends, too, have little time left and will entrust the party with their power, as the Espers in the next rooms then do.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#344 Cid now says the shock reversed the capsules' energy flow and warns the place is unsafe.

In 1.0

In the Magitek Research Facility, Cid says the party's fighting has made the capsules rupture and spill their contents.

Now

He says the fighting has reversed the energy flow in the capsules, and warns that it is not safe there.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#345 Maduin now tries to rouse the collapsed Madonna and asks what happened, instead of scolding her.

In 1.0

In Terra's memory of the Esper World, Maduin finds Madonna collapsed and opens with 'Listen well, and think clearly!' before the choice of what to do with her.

Now

He tries to rouse her and asks what this is, and the same choice follows.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#346 Madonna now asks whether she is in the way in this world, instead of calling herself evil.

In 1.0

In Terra's memory of the Esper World, after Maduin speaks of human greed, Madonna asks whether she is an example of the evil in this world.

Now

She asks whether she is in the way in this world too.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#347 The Esper elder now tells Maduin the human has already left, instead of asking a surprised question.

In 1.0

In Terra's memory of the Esper World, after Madonna says she will go home, the Esper elder cries 'WHAT? The human's gone?' as if caught by surprise.

Now

The elder tells Maduin that the human has already left.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#348 An Esper during the Imperial raid now orders a fall back to the Elder's house, not just reports it reached.

In 1.0

Two years later in Terra's memory, when Gestahl's troops raid the Esper World, an Esper cries that the enemy has made it as far as the Elder's house.

Now

The Esper orders the others to fall back to the Elder's house.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#350 Banon now tells Terra it is no wonder she feels uneasy, instead of a line about fearing no harm.

In 1.0

After Terra admits she is scared, Banon tells her that whoever holds the relic need not fear harm. The Japanese says it is no wonder she is feeling uneasy.

Now

Banon tells Terra it is no wonder she is feeling uneasy.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#351 After the opera dragon, the Impresario now says the party saved the day once again, instead of saying 'we' will have to.

In 1.0

After the dragon on the opera stage is beaten, the Impresario says "we're gonna have to save the day once again." The Japanese thanks the party for helping out yet again.

Now

The Impresario tells the party they saved the day once again, giving them the credit.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#352 Kefka now says "once Leo's gone" instead of speaking as if Leo were already gone while he still stands there.

In 1.0

Kefka announces that "now that Leo's gone" he will turn the water into a river of poison, though Leo is still in the camp. The Japanese says once Leo is gone.

Now

Kefka says he will turn the water into a river of poison once Leo is gone.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#353 Leo now forbids anything underhanded and Kefka names lands siding with the Returners, instead of the old vaguer lines.

In 1.0

Leo scolds Kefka with "Don't be pompous!" before reminding him that the enemy are people too, and Kefka answers that lands which "gave rise to" the Returners need not be spared. The Japanese has Leo forbid anything underhanded, and Kefka speak of lands that side with the Returners.

Now

Leo tells Kefka not to fight dirty. Kefka answers that lands siding with the Returners need not be spared.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#354 Sabin now protests again that he is not the repairman, and Gau's father wants the chair for his own roof.

In 1.0

When Sabin meets Gau's father again, the old hermit greets him as the repairman from before. Sabin starts "That's why we..." and is told to fix a chair so he can reach the roof with it. The Japanese has Sabin protest again, and Gau's father wants the chair for his own roof.

Now

Sabin starts to say once more that he is not the repairman. Gau's father says he needs the chair fixed so he can repair his roof.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#355 Maduin now answers the elder's warning with 'I don't care!', instead of the unfinished 'That fool...'.

In 1.0

In the Esper World, after the elder says he has begun casting the barrier and cannot turn back, Maduin says only "That fool..." The Japanese has him say he does not care.

Now

Maduin answers the elder's warning about the barrier with "I don't care!"

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#356 A soldier in the Esper World now cries that they are being sucked out, instead of a vaguer line.

In 1.0

In the Esper World, a soldier cries "Look what popped out!" The Japanese has him cry out that they are being sucked out.

Now

The soldier stammers that they are being sucked out.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#357 Madonna now begs Gestahl to leave her child alone, instead of asking him to take care of the baby.

In 1.0

Facing Gestahl, Madonna asks him to take care of her baby. The Japanese has her beg him to leave the child alone.

Now

Madonna begs Gestahl to leave her baby alone. His gloating over the half-human girl follows as before.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#358 An Albrook merchant now delights in saying he has nothing to sell Imperial troopers, instead of calling them tightwads.

In 1.0

In Albrook, a merchant later calls Imperial troopers tightwads who are raking in the cash. The Japanese has him enjoy finally saying he has nothing to sell to Imperial soldiers.

Now

The merchant quotes himself telling Imperial troopers he has nothing to sell them, and says he always wanted to say that.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#359 A former Imperial tough now laments that the tables have turned on him, instead of a vaguer line.

In 1.0

In Albrook, an NPC who at first threatens anyone who crosses the Empire later says he would not want to be in "their" shoes, without saying whose. The Japanese has him lament that the tables have turned on him.

Now

The NPC sighs that the tables have turned on them.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#360 Terra now reports that the Espers were angry, instead of the vague "something happened."

In 1.0

When Terra speaks of the Espers, all she says is "Something happened." The Japanese has her say the Espers were angry.

Now

Terra says the Espers were angry.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#361 At the banquet Cid now says no human should hold power beyond his control, instead of a line about Espers listening.

In 1.0

When the party meets Gestahl before the banquet, he says the Espers must be made to understand the war is over, and Cid answers that no human is going to make them sit down and listen. The Japanese has Cid say no human should hold power beyond his control.

Now

Cid answers Gestahl that no human should hold power beyond his control.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#362 Lone Wolf now says he has already taken the treasure, instead of saying he wanted it.

In 1.0

Lone Wolf introduces himself as a pickpocket and says "I wanted that treasure!", as if it had got away from him. The Japanese has him say he has already taken it.

Now

Lone Wolf boasts that the treasure is his now.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#363 Edgar now says his group will keep watch on the Empire, instead of penetrating its base.

In 1.0

Explaining the route from Albrook to Crescent Island, Edgar says his group will penetrate the Imperial base while the others deal with the Espers. The Japanese says his group will keep watch on the Empire.

Now

Edgar says his group will keep watch on the Empire while the others deal with the Espers.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#364 Gestahl now explains the Espers would never listen to the Empire alone, which is why Terra is needed.

In 1.0

Gestahl gives his reason for needing Terra's power as having to set things right after all he has put the Espers through. The Japanese says the Espers would never listen to the Empire alone.

Now

Gestahl says that after all the Empire has put the Espers through, they would never listen to it alone, so he must borrow Terra's power.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#365 Leo now tells Terra she is young and will understand someday, instead of claiming to understand too well himself.

In 1.0

When Terra wonders whether she will ever love someone, Leo tells her she is just young, then says he understands what she means only too well. The Japanese has him say she will understand someday.

Now

Leo tells Terra she is just young and that someday she will understand, adding that he is sure of it.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#366 Strago now says the mage hunts killed mages through unjust trials, instead of saying there were no trials at all.

In 1.0

Telling the history of the mage hunts, Strago says the mages were hunted down like animals and that there were not even any trials. The Japanese says the mages were killed through trials that were unjust.

Now

Strago says the mages were hunted down like animals and that their trials were nothing but shams.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#367 The wounded Maranda soldier now says Imperial pursuers found and wounded him, instead of saying he was caught.

In 1.0

In Mobliz, the wounded soldier from Maranda says he fled the Imperial army and that his pursuers caught him and did this to him. The Japanese says they found him and wounded him, and he was never taken.

Now

The soldier says his pursuers found him and did this to him, with no word of being captured.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#368 On the runaway Magitek armor, Cyan now cries that it will not stop, matching Sabin's answer to bust through.

In 1.0

On the runaway Magitek armor, Cyan cries "We can't stop now!", as if stopping were his choice. The Japanese has him cry that the armor will not stop.

Now

Cyan cries that the armor will not stop, and Sabin answers that they should just bust through.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#369 Terra now asks Celes whether she can love someone, the question really about herself, instead of "have you loved anyone."

In 1.0

In Zozo, once Terra learns that Celes can use magic too, she asks "Have you loved anyone?", a question about Celes's past. The Japanese asks whether Celes can love someone.

Now

Terra asks Celes whether she can love someone.

1.0

Now

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#370 After Banon's Narshe plan, a voice now names the pincer attack tactic instead of just saying there is no way around it.

In 1.0

In Narshe, after Banon plans for the Espers to attack the Empire from the east while his side storms in from the north, a voice says only "No way around it." The Japanese names the tactic, a pincer attack.

Now

The voice sums up Banon's plan as a pincer attack.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#371 In Kohlingen, the Patriarch now cries that the Magicite has shattered to bits, instead of saying it is going to shatter.

In 1.0

In Kohlingen, just before Rachel speaks to Locke, the NPC labelled Patriarch yells that the Magicite is going to shatter. The Japanese has him cry that it has already shattered to bits.

Now

The NPC cries that the Magicite has shattered to bits.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#372 Gestahl now says the Espers' power is too great, which the party's reply quotes back, instead of calling them spiteful.

In 1.0

Gestahl tells the party that the Espers from the sealed gate have decimated his Empire, and says they are "acting spiteful." The Japanese says their power is too great.

Now

Gestahl says the Espers' power is too great and that they must be stopped.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#373 The party's reply to Gestahl now concedes the Espers' power is too great, instead of saying they have gone too far.

In 1.0

After Gestahl's plea, the agreeing reply says the Espers "have gone too far." The Japanese reply concedes that their power is too great.

Now

The agreeing reply says the Espers' power is too great, matching Gestahl's claim.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#374 The opera narration now calls Draco a soldier of the West in a war growing fiercer by the day, instead of "the West's great hero".

In 1.0

The opera's narration says the West and East "were waging war" and names Draco "the West's great hero" as he thinks of Maria. The Japanese makes him a soldier of the West at the front, in a war that grows fiercer by the day.

Now

The narration says the war between West and East grew fiercer by the day, and calls Draco a soldier of the West.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#440 A World of Ruin Albrook NPC now correctly says a monk, not Celes, was searching for someone and left for Tzen.

In 1.0

In Albrook in the World of Ruin, an NPC greets Celes with "You again?" and says she looks just like someone who came searching for his friends and went north to Tzen, though the NPC has never met Celes. The Japanese has it the other way round.

Now

She now asks a plain "You...?" and says Celes looks like the person a monk who stopped by recently was searching for, the monk who went north to Tzen.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#441 Locke now says Rachel was taken from him, instead of saying she was jailed by the Empire.

In 1.0

At the Returners' hideout, Locke tells Terra that someone important to him "was jailed" by the Empire, but Rachel was never jailed. The Japanese says the Empire took that person from him.

Now

Locke's line now says the Empire took that person from him.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#442 A Returner now asks the party to look after Banon, instead of sending regards while he stands right there.

In 1.0

At the Returners' hideout, after Banon decides to set out for Narshe with the party, a Returner says to give their regards to Banon, who is standing right there in the party.

Now

The Returner now simply asks the party to please look after him.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#443 Locke's Grandma now told him ordinary bedtime stories, not stories about magical machines from the ancient war.

In 1.0

At the Returners' hideout, when Banon brings up the ancient War of the Magi, Locke says his Grandma used to tell him stories about "magical machines", but the Japanese mentions only her bedtime stories and puts no machines in that war.

Now

Locke now remembers the bedtime stories his Grandma told him and wonders whether they could have been true.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#444 Banon's theory now describes Esper power drawn out and injected into humans, instead of "humans and machines" imbued with it.

In 1.0

At the Returners' hideout, Banon's frightening theory about the ancient War of the Magi says "humans and machines" were imbued with power drained from Espers, but the Japanese mentions no machines.

Now

His theory now says that power was drained from Espers and injected into humans.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#445 Sabin now calls the plan gibberish and admits it sounds fun to him, instead of accusing someone of enjoying it.

In 1.0

At the Returners' hideout, when Terra agrees to Banon's plan to have her speak with the frozen Esper, Sabin calls it nonsense and accuses someone of enjoying it.

Now

Sabin now admits the plan is gibberish to him, then says it sounds like fun.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#446 Celes's introduction now says the Empire forged her into a Magitek Knight, instead of calling her a "product of genetic engineering."

In 1.0

When Locke finds Celes in a cell under South Figaro, the caption that introduces her calls her a "product of genetic engineering", but the Japanese credits the Empire's elite training instead.

Now

The caption now says the Empire forged her into a Magitek Knight.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#447 Gau's father now says his grass is 50 feet high, close to the Japanese 15 meters, instead of 25 feet.

In 1.0

Gau's father, who takes his visitors for repairmen, grumbles that his grass has grown 25 feet high, where the Japanese gives 15 metres.

Now

The grass is now 50 feet high, close to the Japanese figure.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#449 When Celes and Terra meet in Narshe, Celes now recognizes Terra as the girl born with magic, instead of greeting her as a stranger.

In 1.0

In Narshe, before Kefka's attack, Celes greets Terra as if meeting a stranger, marvelling that Terra was born with magic and calling it a lovely gift, where the Japanese has her recognise Terra.

Now

Celes now names her as the girl born with magic and says she never thought they would meet again like this, and Terra adds that Celes's magic seems not quite like hers.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#450 Locke now asks Rachel's father to let him talk to her, instead of mentioning a proposal.

In 1.0

In Locke's flashback in Kohlingen, Rachel's father blames him for her lost memory, and Locke protests that she said "Yes!" before breaking off, a proposal the Japanese never mentions.

Now

Locke now just asks to be allowed to talk to Rachel.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#451 The Zozo thug's line about the building's top now matches every other lie in Zozo, denying any girl is there.

In 1.0

In Zozo, where every NPC lies, an NPC asked about the girl the party is looking for says he has seen none, then gives an honest tip: check the top of the building.

Now

He now lies like the rest of Zozo and swears there is certainly no girl at the top of the building.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#452 A Jidoor NPC now says nobody is fool enough to go to the Imperial continent these days.

In 1.0

In Jidoor, an NPC says there is no easy way to reach the Imperial lands, where the Japanese makes a different point, about who would want to go there at all.

Now

She now says that, these days, nobody is fool enough to go to the Imperial continent.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#453 A Vector citizen now says the Emperor jailed Kefka for his crimes, instead of saying he is "on his last legs."

In 1.0

In Vector, one of the NPCs in the Imperial castle says Kefka has been imprisoned for war crimes and is "on his last legs", as if he were close to death.

Now

The line now says Kefka was thrown in prison once the Emperor learned of his crimes, and that it is said to be a life sentence.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#454 Cid now says tearing out the casino and refitting the ship would make it faster, instead of joking about killing time there.

In 1.0

Aboard the Blackjack, when Setzer tells Cid not to touch anything, Cid answers "Go kill time in the casino!" and promises to speed the ship up.

Now

Cid now suggests tearing out the casino and refitting the ship to make it even faster.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#455 A South Figaro merchant in Locke's scenario now says the Empire has finished his business, instead of saying it is booming.

In 1.0

During Locke's scenario in South Figaro, a merchant says that thanks to the Empire his business is up, where the Japanese says the opposite.

Now

He now says that thanks to the Empire, his business is finished.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#456 Relm now answers Shadow's dog with "Bye-bye" instead of "Oh, all right."

In 1.0

In Strago's house in Thamasa, when Shadow calls Interceptor to him, Relm answers "Oh, all right", where the Japanese is a simple goodbye to the dog.

Now

Relm now just says "Bye-bye" to the dog.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#457 The story now says Setzer found the wrecked Falcon himself, matching his next line about restoring it.

In 1.0

In Setzer's flashback of Daryl, the narration says the wreck of the Falcon "was found" a full year later, without saying by whom.

Now

The narration is now in Setzer's own words: a full year later, he found the wreck of the Falcon in a distant land.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#458 Locke now says everything he believed in died with Rachel and nothing will feel real until he sets things right, instead of losing "all sense of purpose."

In 1.0

In the Phoenix Cave, when the party finds Locke with the cracked Phoenix Magicite, he says he could not save Rachel and has "lost all sense of purpose", where the Japanese speaks of losing the truth.

Now

He now says everything he believed in died with her, and nothing will feel real to him until he sets things right.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#459 Kefka now threatens to make everything the party lives for disappear, the things they just named, instead of a vaguer threat.

In 1.0

In the final confrontation, the party members each name what they live for and Kefka mocks them, then promises to make them all disappear.

Now

Kefka now says he will make everything they live for disappear.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#460 Kefka now pants as well as laughs when the party chases him through the Imperial Camp, and still calls his pursuer a toad.

In 1.0

At the Imperial camp outside Doma, when the party chases Kefka around the camp and he stops, Kefka laughs and calls his pursuer a toad, where the Japanese has him out of breath and grumbling about how persistent the pursuer is.

Now

Kefka now pants before he laughs, and calls his pursuer a persistent little toad.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#461 On the Phantom Train, a line after a fight now pants and asks what that was all about, instead of laughing.

In 1.0

On the Phantom Train, right after a fight, a line with no speaker name laughs and asks what ever they thought they were doing, where the Japanese has the speaker catching their breath instead.

Now

The line now pants for breath and asks what in the world that was all about.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#462 A Doma-camp soldier now says Kefka is plotting to oust Leo, setting up Leo's recall, instead of guessing he'll be promoted.

In 1.0

At the Imperial camp outside Doma, two soldiers whisper about Kefka, and one guesses that if Kefka drives General Leo out of the battalion, he will probably become the next general.

Now

The soldier now passes on word that Kefka is plotting to drive Leo out and make himself general.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#463 Rachel's keeper now asks whether Locke means the legendary soul-calling treasure, the hint the next town repeats.

In 1.0

In Kohlingen, Locke asks whether there is some way to call Rachel back, and her keeper only laughs that she would come back if he could call her, and that he will surely find something, without the treasure the Japanese names.

Now

The keeper now asks whether Locke means the legendary treasure that calls souls back, and laughs that with it she might come back to life.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#464 The Esper at the gate now says the day is like the storm of 2 years ago, instead of just odd wind.

In 1.0

In the flashback to the Esper world, an Esper sees humans coming and cries that the gate between the worlds has opened again, saying the wind feels odd, just like 2 years before.

Now

The Esper now says this day is just like the day of that storm 2 years ago.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#466 Cyan now says the party will keep watch on the Empire, and Locke answers that he is counting on them, instead of investigating a Vector they already have the run of.

In 1.0

When Locke tells the others to wait in Vector, Cyan answers that they will stay and "investigate", though the party already has the run of Vector. The Japanese has him say they will keep watch on the Empire.

Now

Cyan now says those who stay behind in Vector will keep an eye on the Empire, and Locke answers that he is counting on them.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#467 Strago now explains the three statues turned to stone facing one another, each holding the others' power in check, which is why moving them matters.

In 1.0

When Strago tells Terra about the three statues, he says they somehow "neutralized" each other's power and then sealed themselves away, leaving out why their positions matter: in the Japanese, they turned to stone facing one another so that their gazes cancelled out.

Now

Strago now says the three turned to stone facing one another, each holding the others' power in check.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#468 Shadow's last line now says he can stop running at last and asks Baram, his old friend, to save him a seat.

In 1.0

Shadow's last words, after he sends Interceptor away, tell Baram he will stop running and "begin all over again", where the Japanese has no fresh start: he says he can stop running at last and asks Baram for a warm welcome.

Now

He now says he can stop running at last and asks Baram, his old friend, to save him a seat.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#469 Locke's answer to Kefka now names "someone to protect," instead of a line about celebrating life.

In 1.0

When Kefka asks whether the party has found its joy in this nearly dead world, Locke says he has learned to "celebrate life" and the living, where in the Japanese he says he has found someone to protect.

Now

Locke now tells Kefka he has found someone to protect.

Credit: previously found by Legends of Localization, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#29 Only one spelling of Siegfried is used for each of the two: the thief keeps Ziegfried, the Colosseum opponent is Siegfried.

In 1.0

The name Siegfried came in three spellings, SIGFRIED when he speaks, Siegfried as his battle name and Ziegfried in a line of Ultros, for two different swordsmen: the thief on the Phantom Train and in the Zone Eater, and the Colosseum opponent.

Now

The thief is now Ziegfried in speech and in battle, and the Colosseum opponent and Ultros use Siegfried.

Credit: previously fixed by DarkMage, my implementation

#34 Yipee and Yippy are now both spelled Yippee.

In 1.0

The same cheer was spelled two ways, 'Yipee' in one line and 'Yippy' in an NPC's shout.

Now

Both now say 'Yippee'.

Credit: as in the GBA release, my implementation

#43 The Statues and the goddesses are now called the Warring Triad throughout the script.

In 1.0

The Japanese script uses one name for the three gods, but the English split it into "the Statues" and "goddesses".

Now

They are now the Warring Triad, the GBA release's own name, or "gods" in plain mentions.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation

#46 Twenty lines that called one thing by two names now agree, and the Phantom Train's conductor is no longer labelled IMPRESARIO like the opera director.

In 1.0

Some things had two names in the script: DARILL and DARYL for the same tomb, MagiTek and Magitek, Magi Wars and War of the Magi, and the Phantom Train's conductor and the opera director were both labelled IMPRESARIO.

Now

Each now uses the form the script already used more, and the NPC on the train is now CONDUCTOR.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation

#52 The dance is now spelled Dusk Requiem.

In 1.0

One of Mog's dances was spelled "Dusk Requium" wherever its name was shown.

Now

It is now spelled Dusk Requiem.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation

#283 The esper tutorial now says Vigor instead of the old name Strength.

In 1.0

The esper tutorial said some espers raise stats such as "Strength" at level up, but the item and equip screens call that stat Vigor.

Now

The tutorial now says Vigor.

Credit: previously found and fixed by Coraline Violet, my implementation

#290 The Phantom Train enemy, previously named GhostTrain, is renamed to match the dialogue calling it the Phantom Train.

In 1.0

The Phantom Train, when fought, was named GhostTrain, though every line of dialogue calls it the Phantom Train.

Now

It is now named PhntmTrain.

Credit: previously found by ManuLöwe, my implementation, checked against the Japanese

#26 Fourteen spelling, grammar and spacing errors in the script are corrected, and one sentence no longer calls Shadow her.

In 1.0

The script held misspellings such as 'assasin', 'memebers', 'bouns', 'musn't', 'potatos', 'Bolderdash', one 'Katrin' among many 'Katarin', two double spaces and more, and a line in the Veldt cave called the wounded Shadow 'her'.

Now

Each is corrected, including 'an monster' and 'Airforce', and the Veldt line's second sentence now says the party will head back to Thamasa, with no pronoun; entry 281 fixes the 'her' in its first.

Credit: previously found by mblock129 and fixed by Imzogelmo, my implementation

#41 Formulaic double exclamation marks are reduced to a single one throughout the script.

In 1.0

Over two hundred lines in dialogue, battle messages, enemy lines and item descriptions used a doubled exclamation mark, most of them following the Japanese script, which doubles its marks for emphasis.

Now

Doubled marks are now single, while runs of three or more, as in Kefka's laugh, are kept.